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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
 Posted - 06/21/2006 : 5:04:05 PM
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This is the pirate part where we're reintroduced into the manga (and Jynx, Sparklies, and Tesgura are intro'd) It's in the format I use for when I write volumes, so for those of you who don't know:
**is an action, my own thought sometimes, or etc
++ is a thought
Currently, everyone's a bit gloomy about an event that happened in the main part of the manga. I don't want to say what because it's a bit of a spoiler. Read over this and please change what you say to more your vernacular, I guess? Try not to change the whole meaning of the sentence though...and make sure to change what your husbands say as well...if you've forgotten somehow...
Adrian-mine
Ryan-Laura
Lakyle- Caitlin
Tidus- Jon
Tesstory- Donna
Jynrei- Van
Sree- Tate
Read on and make sure to post comments/changes. It's unfinished, of course.
Chapter (???): Return of the Pirates
*Person from behind on comp*
…-???
Nothing…nothing for 3 years…-???
*Map of Uchuu*
+Maybe father’s right…maybe I should give up- ???+
*sighs*
*Comp starts blinking, ???’s eyes widen*
*Spot on map*
What’s this…?- ???
*Types*
*Zooms in on blinking dot on screen*
….Neo-Japan?- ???
I guess it’s better then nothing…- intro’d- Tate
Guys!-Tate
*Looks around*
*House is empty*
Grr…what do I pay them for?-Tate -_-
* “Underground” concert*
*Band on stage*
*Lucifel, Chris, Lunasi, and Lakyle*
*Lakyle sings…um, I think we were supposed to have made up lyrics last year…I think we could at least come up with a line ^^;*
*Finishes set*
*Cell phone rings*
*Lakyle picks it up*
What?- Lakey
Where are you?- Tate
Concert…- Lakyle
*Lucifel with groupies in the bg ^^*
Well…don’t get too wasted. We’re heading back to Uchuu tomorrow- Tate
Another pointless journey? Fun- Lakyle
This is the first time the map has done this…- Tate
Fine. When are we heading out?- Lakyle
Sometime early morning. Where are the others?- Tate
Am I their keeper’s?- Lakey -_-
You have to know where at least one of them is- Tate
I think some of them planned to go club…- Lakyle
Gah…-Tate
*Huge crowd of dancing people*
*??? sipping Sobe or something…*
*???2 Sitting on stool*
Well…this is fun- ???2
Mm hmm. You’re supposed to be finding someone to dance with. Why you standing over here with me?- ???
Gah…I think I lost all desire for this little mission of yours, Adrian- ???
*Who else would club but my hubby? XP*
Jynrei, you suck- Adrian
*I dunno about Van’s tho*
*Adrian notices phone ringing*
*Picks up*
Yo- Adrian
I just wanted to inform you that we’re heading for Uchuu tomorrow- Tate
Say what? C’mon…- Adrian
I have a lead this time- Tate
Yea, like the other 7 leads- Adrian
Adrian…- Tate
Meh, you know I kid (Sorta…)- Adrian
We’re leaving early so you might want to get some sleep…you’re rather cranky tired- Tate
*Adrian smirked*
Not much going on here anyway….see ya- Adrian
*Clicks off*
Back to Uchuu- Adrian
Oh jeez…- Jynrei
*Arcade*
*??? Playing some game…I don’t think I have to put in the “???”*
Yay!- ???
^^ That was fun- ???
*reaches into pockets*
O_O
T-T Oh no! I don’t have anymore tokens- ??
*cell rings*
; ; Hello?- ??
Tidus…- Tate
Tate! I’m out of tokens!- Tidus ; ;
…That’s…too bad. But we’re going to Uchuu tomorrow, early- Tate
^_^ Oh sweet! Uchuu!- Tidus
*Tidus glances at watch*
I’m gonna get a game of DDR™ and then I’ll be right home! Bye!- Tidus
Hey, wait for me guys!- Tidus
*Runs after, I guess, his group of friends o.O*
…-Tate *Tidus didn’t hang up ^^;*
*??? Gambling*
*Stares at his cards*
*Other guys laughing*
*Never played poker and don’t remember black jack so someone fix my terms ^^;*
You haven’t had a good hand all night, Tesstory- one guy
*Tesstory smiles, sipping beer*
Just play…- Tess
*places down good hands…*
Well?- two guy
*Tesstory drops hand*
*Whatever a perfect hand would be*
*Guys dumbfounded*
*Takes cash*
Pleasure doing business- Tess
*Walks out*
*Pulls out his real hand*
Jeez, those cards they had had to be rigged- Tess
*From behind*
Eh, good thing I brought my own…-Tess
*Phone rings*
Hello?- Tess
Tess, we’re going to Uchuu tomorrow…- Tate
Whoo, I love wandering through the forest- Tess
-_- Tess…- Tate
I’m coming, I’m coming…I’m gonna get a magazine first…- Tess
*Tate imagines what kind of magazine he’ll get*
*Covers eyes*
Just…try not to be too tired tomorrow- Tate
Hey, hey, nothing a good cup of coffee won’t fix- Tess
*Clicks off*
Last one…- Tate
*Bookstore*
*??? Looking at book*
*Stack of books beside him*
This one looks good too…- ???
*Walks outside with bag, MP3 in ear*
+…*Whatever he happens to listen to*+
*Cell rings*
*Picks up*
Hello?- ???
Ryan…it’s kind of weird for you to be out this late- Tate
Sorry…I got a bit distracted- Ryan
Well, I wanted to tell you we head to Uchuu tomorrow- Tate
Okay…I should be home soon to prepare- Ryan
Okay- Tate
*Clicks off*
+I hope this time…it’s real- Tate+
*Lysa sitting outside on bench*
*Tali staring at her*
*Tsu sitting and reading behind him*
She’ll move on- Tsu
Oh, will she?- Tali
She has to…- Tsu
…Yes- Tali
I don’t know what went down in the Calian Village but I’m pretty sure it could’ve been stopped- Tsu
…I do not know…looked pretty…morbid- Tali
Killing a whole village of helpless creatures… *red glint*- Tsu
*Tali sighs lightly*
Yes …but…Lysa- Tali
Like I said…she can get past it. If she can’t, then maybe she wasn’t meant to be an assassin after all- Tsu
*Tali glances back outside*
…I think…that may be the case- Tali
?- Tsu
I am going to talk to her- Tali
Yea, you do that- Tsu *<-Insinuating something*
*Tali glowers*
*Pushes door open*
*Lysa looks up*
*Tali smiles*
Hello. How are you feeling?- Tali
Sad…- Lysa
I am sorry…- Tali
*Lysa sighs*
But it happens all the time, Lysa- Tali
!- Lysa
We can not always stop these things. I wish I could tell you this is the only time something like this will happen…but I can’t. It is okay to be upset…it is human. But if this distracts you…throws you off path…then maybe…you should…go- Tali
*Lysa doesn’t look happy ^^; *
So you want me to leave?- Lysa
Eh?? N-no! I mean- I do not—Tali
It sounds like it!- Lysa
*Turns*
Fine, I’ll go!- Lysa
Lysa, wait!- Tali
*Runs away*
*Tali quickly follows*
*Lysa suddenly stops*
Lysa…I just do not want you to get hurt- Tali
…- Lysa
Ly— Tali
LYSA~!!- ???
!!- Tali
*Lysa gets glomped*
You’re ALIVE!!- Sree ^^
-_- No thanks to you- Lysa
Meanie! I was going to give you chocolate too!!- Sree
*Holds bag of soaked chocolate*
O_O Lysa
…Uh, no thanks. I’ll just forgive you ^^;;- Lysa
Whoo!!- Sree
…-Jon
Oh my God, Jon!- Lysa
*Hugs him*
*Tali O.O*
Finally! We thought we would’ve had to turn Sree in for killing you- Donna
I’ll mardair you- Sree
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X Daggers
Munchy Monkey Owns You
367 Posts |
Posted - 06/22/2006 : 06:28:34 AM
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Hey, I wanna be regular Caitlin in that last part!
Off for another pointless journey? Awesome...- Lakyle
This is the first time the map has done this…- Tate
Fine. When are we heading out?- Lakyle
Sometime [in the] early morning. Where are the others?- Tate
Am I their keeper?- Lakey -_-
You have to know where at least one of them is[!]- Tate
I know someone mentioned clubbing...- Lakyle
Gah…-Tate
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 06/29/2006 : 3:35:33 PM
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^_^ Continued...still have a bit more to write. Also, the links are pictures from forever ago.
http://i3.tinypic.com/16276gi.jpg
http://i3.tinypic.com/1627fjs.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/1628e12.jpg
So yea, Lysa…who’s this?- Donna
! Oh, this….- Lysa.
*Tali looking puzzled*
This is Tali- Lysa
…-Tali
Is he the reason you didn’t even bother to look for the ship?- Laura
No!- Lysa
Uh huh- Sree
Whoo…we were able to save some of the stuff we stole- Andrea
?? Save? Why’d it have to be saved?- Lysa
…- all
Sree kind of…- Laura
Burned down your ship- Caitlin
…-Lysa
*Chases after Sree*
*Not sure what Sree would say*- Sree
…You are her…crewmates?- Tali
Can’t be anymore… no ship- Van *intro*
Luckily we came by or they would have just drowned- Jon
(*I despise talking for you guys!*)
Wait!- Lysa
?- all
You guys still have the ship I sent you out in?- Lysa
Yup- Jon
Okay! We’ll take that and go steal another ship!- Lysa
Sounds like a plan- Laura
Okay! Let me go get my stuff!- Lysa
(Stuff?- all)
*Tali follows*
…You are leaving?- Tali
-_- I thought you wanted me to- Lysa
I…- Tali
*Stops and stare at each other*
*Tali just looks away*
Hmph. Bye, Tali- Lysa
*Tali sighs*
Feel free to go past the bold part, it’s Daggers and my manga characters talking
WHAT?- Jack
You! How dare you let blond Sexy leave?!- Jack
*Tali sighs*
*Tsu toys with bangs*
Really, Tali…we just lost one team member already…-Tsu
Hey, you were the one who said if she could not get past the village incident, she wasn’t meant to be an assassin!- Tali
Did I say that…?- Tsu *disinterested as ever*
*Tali veins*
My shopping buddy ; ;- Anita
Good riddance- Cyn -_-
*Tsu holds Anita back*
Tali, come on…it’s only been 3 weeks. And from the sounds of it, Lysa has never seen things like that. We’ve seen it over and over. If she lets it dictate her life, then no, she’s not meant to be an assassin. But it’s normal to feel the way she…did- Tsu
…We’ve seen it over and over- Tali
?- all
I…do not wish her to become indifferent to such things- Tali
You dummy!- Anita
!- Tali
You don’t know Lysa at all! Men!- Anita
*Leaves*
Look, now you’ve gone and got Sexy mad- Jack (You’re on a roll)
…-Tali
*Turns*
I am going to go and get her back- Tali
Good luck- Tsu
Will he even be able to catch up?- Jack -_-
I doubt they got far…- Tsu
*Lysa seems glum*
Loser, what’s with you?!- Sree
Nothing…-Lysa
She’s sad because she had to leave her boyfriend-Donna
He wasn’t my boyfriend!- Lysa
You donut- Sree
-_- Lysa
ZOMG, are you for real?- Tesstory
It’s a miracle…- Tate
*Sree*
*Tate’s eyes*
So now what? We’ve finally found them and we’re just going to stand here and hide?- Jynrei
I want to be subtle, Jynrei. I haven’t seen her in a long time- Tate
Yea, I’m not sure how she’d respond to you stalking her- Adrian
I have not been—Tate
*Tesstory throws a glowing card*
What the f--!- Lakyle (I’m not “cutting” the profanity, but it’s more like he caught himself because he was talking loudly)
TESSTORY, why did you--?!- Tate
If a tree falls in the forest, does anyone hear it?- Tess (Makes nonsensical comments like this)
…………-all (O_O)
…What?- Adrian
Um, guys…-Tidus
*Loud crackle O_O*
*Shocked responses come from our direction*
Oh crap…- Jynrei
*Pirates attack ^^;*
Heyyy- Sree
?- All
I remember you!- Sree
I, uh…- Tate
Prince Tate of Adajia. What are you doing here?!- Sree
I…was…-Tate
Ugh! This idiot has been looking for you- Tess
Tesstory!- Tate
Huh? Why?- Sree
Be-because…- Tate
How cute- Van
^^- girls
>_> guys
*Tate sighs*
*Donna’s ears twitch (Remember ay, she’s a kitsune)*
Something’s coming- Donna
?- all
*Massive explosion*
*All manage to dodge*
What…?- Ryan
*Crowd of armed…people o.O*
Tate Esperanza…?- one
…Yes- Tate
Ha. Looking for Hibiki’s HQs and we find the prince- one
! Hibiki’s HQs…?- Lysa
We were hired to destroy it and all it’s members- two
…I won’t let you- Lysa
Ha, you don’t have to worry about it- one
*Dodges forward*
You’ll die here with the prince- one
!- Lysa
*Suddenly stops*
*Chopped down*
!?- Lysa
Are you all right?- Tali
! Tali?- Lysa
Damn. They’ve found out already- one
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Vivya
The Princess
USA
98 Posts |
Posted - 07/12/2006 : 09:00:33 AM
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X Daggers
Munchy Monkey Owns You
367 Posts |
Posted - 07/12/2006 : 5:12:07 PM
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Why didn't I see this when it was posted like two weeks ago? (O_o)
Hi Sree!
I'm pretty easy to write for; I talk "questioningly", I guess you could say. I tend to ask a lot of questions, and don't like chit-chat. I seldom talk in large groups, too, unless I have something important to point out or resolutions to problems, and I know I'll be heard. So, I'm IC since I've only spoken once XD
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 07/12/2006 : 7:58:59 PM
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I dunno. I dont notice stuff posted either though unless it has that bright green thing next to it ^^;
Yea, I think it's pretty good so far. I don't imagine us saying much around a bunch of strangers (cept Lysa and Sree)
Well, our journey is a little pointless...^^;
I'm definitely going to revamp before I illustrate as well but here's some more...I think I added some.
*Donna’s ears twitch (Remember ay, she’s a kitsune)*
Something’s coming- Donna
?- all
*Massive explosion*
*All manage to dodge*
What…?- Ryan
*Crowd of armed…people o.O*
Tate Esperanza…?- one
…Yes- Tate
Ha. Looking for Hibiki’s HQs and we find the prince…who also is wanted dead- one
!?!- Tate
Oh yea…I remember now- Adrian
! Wh-what?!- Tate
Ah yea, you’re kind of got a bounty over your head. I totally forgot to tell you- Tess
You’re all useless!- Tate *vein*
^^- Tidus
Why do you want Hibiki’s HQs…?- Lysa
We were hired to destroy it and all it’s members- two
…I won’t let you- Lysa
Ha, you don’t have to worry about it- one
*Dodges forward*
You’ll die here with the prince- one
!- Lysa
*Suddenly stops*
*Chopped down*
!?- Lysa
Are you all right?- Tali
! Tali?- Lysa
Damn. They’ve found out already- one
?- Tali
Tali, the-their coming after the headquarters!- Lysa
…I am not concerned- Tali
!!- guys trying to kill ppl
You-you should be concerned!- one
^^ Hi everybody! Is there a party?!- Anita
^^ There should be!- Tidus
Yay! Anita will get the confetti ^^- Anita
^^ I’ll get a cake- Tidus
…-everyone else
Anita…uh, these guys are trying to infiltrate the base- Lysa
*Anita glances at them*
*Chibi laughs*
That’s so funny! Anita has to get Tsu and Jack and tell them that one- Anita n_n
*dashes off*
They mock us!- two
Apparently- Adrian
*Draws his weapon, based off Luciendar, the sword of light*
*Jynrei pulls out his weapon…which I’ve forgotten. A rod o.O*
But yea, since we’re supposed to protect Prince Tate here, we’ll have to kill you- Jynrei
Not if we have her- ???
*All turn*
*Sree*
How dare you hold me captive!? I will (someone finish sree-esque statement)- Sree
When did that happen…?- Jon
Do we ever really notice Sree?- Donna
We try…-Laura
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 08/20/2006 : 5:55:18 PM
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okay, here it all is. Make changes now. i'm gonna draw it soon.
Chapter (???): Return of the Pirates
*Person from behind on comp*
…-???
Nothing…nothing for 3 years…-???
*Map of Uchuu*
+Maybe father’s right…maybe I should give up- ???+
*sighs*
*Comp starts blinking, ???’s eyes widen*
*Spot on map*
What’s this…?- ???
*Types*
*Zooms in on blinking dot on screen*
….Neo-Japan?- ???
I guess it’s better then nothing…- intro’d- Tate
Guys!-Tate
*Looks around*
*House is empty*
Grr…what do I pay them for?-Tate -_-
* “Underground” concert*
*Band on stage*
*Lucifel, Chris, Lunasi, and Lakyle*
*Lakyle sings…um, I think we were supposed to have made up lyrics last year…I think we could at least come up with a line ^^;*
*Finishes set*
*Cell phone rings*
*Lakyle picks it up*
What?- Lakey
Where are you?- Tate
Concert…- Lakyle
*Lucifel with groupies in the bg ^^*
Well…don’t get too wasted. We’re heading back to Uchuu tomorrow- Tate
Another pointless journey? Fun- Lakyle
This is the first time the map has done this…- Tate
Fine. When are we heading out?- Lakyle
Sometime early morning. Where are the others?- Tate
Am I their keeper’s?- Lakey -_-
You have to know where at least one of them is- Tate
I think some of them planned to go club…- Lakyle
Gah…-Tate
*Huge crowd of dancing people*
*??? sipping Sobe or something…*
*???2 Sitting on stool*
Well…this is fun- ???2
Mm hmm. You’re supposed to be finding someone to dance with. Why you standing over here with me?- ???
Gah…I think I lost all desire for this little mission of yours, Adrian- ???
*Who else would club but my hubby? XP*
Jynrei, you suck- Adrian
*I dunno about Van’s tho*
*Adrian notices phone ringing*
*Picks up*
Yo- Adrian
I just wanted to inform you that we’re heading for Uchuu tomorrow- Tate
Say what? C’mon…- Adrian
I have a lead this time- Tate
Yea, like the other 7 leads- Adrian
Adrian…- Tate
Meh, you know I kid (Sorta…)- Adrian
We’re leaving early so you might want to get some sleep…you’re rather cranky tired- Tate
*Adrian smirked*
Not much going on here anyway….see ya- Adrian
*Clicks off*
Back to Uchuu- Adrian
Oh jeez…- Jynrei
*Arcade*
*??? Playing some game…I don’t think I have to put in the “???”*
Yay!- ???
^^ That was fun- ???
*reaches into pockets*
O_O
T-T Oh no! I don’t have anymore tokens- ??
*cell rings*
; ; Hello?- ??
Tidus…- Tate
Tate! I’m out of tokens!- Tidus ; ;
…That’s…too bad. But we’re going to Uchuu tomorrow, early- Tate
^_^ Oh sweet! Uchuu!- Tidus
*Tidus glances at watch*
I’m gonna get a game of DDR™ and then I’ll be right home! Bye!- Tidus
Hey, wait for me guys!- Tidus
*Runs after, I guess, his group of friends o.O*
…-Tate *Tidus didn’t hang up ^^;*
*??? Gambling*
*Stares at his cards*
*Other guys laughing*
*Never played poker and don’t remember black jack so someone fix my terms ^^;*
You haven’t had a good hand all night, Tesstory- one guy
*Tesstory smiles, sipping beer*
Just play…- Tess
*places down good hands…*
Well?- two guy
*Tesstory drops hand*
*Whatever a perfect hand would be*
*Guys dumbfounded*
*Takes cash*
Pleasure doing business- Tess
*Walks out*
*Pulls out his real hand*
Jeez, those cards they had had to be rigged- Tess
*From behind*
Eh, good thing I brought my own…-Tess
*Phone rings*
Hello?- Tess
Tess, we’re going to Uchuu tomorrow…- Tate
Whoo, I love wandering through the forest- Tess
-_- Tess…- Tate
I’m coming, I’m coming…I’m gonna get a magazine first…- Tess
*Tate imagines what kind of magazine he’ll get*
*Covers eyes*
Just…try not to be too tired tomorrow- Tate
Hey, hey, nothing a good cup of coffee won’t fix- Tess
*Clicks off*
Last one…- Tate
*Bookstore*
*??? Looking at book*
*Stack of books beside him*
This one looks good too…- ???
*Walks outside with bag, MP3 in ear*
+…*Whatever he happens to listen to*+
*Cell rings*
*Picks up*
Hello?- ???
Ryan…it’s kind of weird for you to be out this late- Tate
Sorry…I got a bit distracted- Ryan
Well, I wanted to tell you we head to Uchuu tomorrow- Tate
Okay…I should be home soon to prepare- Ryan
Okay- Tate
*Clicks off*
+I hope this time…it’s real- Tate+
*Lysa sitting outside on bench*
*Tali staring at her*
*Tsu sitting and reading behind him*
She’ll move on- Tsu
Oh, will she?- Tali
She has to…- Tsu
…Yes- Tali
I don’t know what went down in the Calian Village but I’m pretty sure it could’ve been stopped- Tsu
…I do not know…looked pretty…morbid- Tali
Killing a whole village of helpless creatures… *red glint*- Tsu
*Tali sighs lightly*
Yes …but…Lysa- Tali
Like I said…she can get past it. If she can’t, then maybe she wasn’t meant to be an assassin after all- Tsu
*Tali glances back outside*
…I think…that may be the case- Tali
?- Tsu
I am going to talk to her- Tali
Yea, you do that- Tsu *<-Insinuating something*
*Tali glowers*
*Pushes door open*
*Lysa looks up*
*Tali smiles*
Hello. How are you feeling?- Tali
Sad…- Lysa
I am sorry…- Tali
*Lysa sighs*
But it happens all the time, Lysa- Tali
!- Lysa
We can not always stop these things. I wish I could tell you this is the only time something like this will happen…but I can’t. It is okay to be upset…it is human. But if this distracts you…throws you off path…then maybe…you should…go- Tali
*Lysa doesn’t look happy ^^; *
So you want me to leave?- Lysa
Eh?? N-no! I mean- I do not—Tali
It sounds like it!- Lysa
*Turns*
Fine, I’ll go!- Lysa
Lysa, wait!- Tali
*Runs away*
*Tali quickly follows*
*Lysa suddenly stops*
Lysa…I just do not want you to get hurt- Tali
…- Lysa
Ly— Tali
LYSA~!!- ???
!!- Tali
*Lysa gets glomped*
You’re ALIVE!!- Sree ^^
-_- No thanks to you- Lysa
Meanie! I was going to give you chocolate too!!- Sree
*Holds bag of soaked chocolate*
O_O Lysa
…Uh, no thanks. I’ll just forgive you ^^;;- Lysa
Whoo!!- Sree
…-Jon *intro*
Oh my God, Jon!- Lysa
*Hugs him*
*Tali O.O*
Finally! We thought we would’ve had to turn Sree in for killing you- Donna *intro*
I’ll mardair you- Sree
http://i3.tinypic.com/16276gi.jpg
http://i3.tinypic.com/1627fjs.jpg
http://i4.tinypic.com/1628e12.jpg
So yea, Lysa…who’s this?- Donna
! Oh, this….- Lysa.
*Tali looking puzzled*
This is Tali- Lysa
…-Tali
Is he the reason you didn’t even bother to look for the ship?- Laura
No!- Lysa
Uh huh- Sree
Whoo…we were able to save some of the stuff we stole- Andrea
?? Save? Why’d it have to be saved?- Lysa
…- all
Sree kind of…- Laura
Burned down your ship- Caitlin
…-Lysa
*Chases after Sree*
*Not sure what Sree would say*- Sree
…You are her…crewmates?- Tali
Can’t be anymore… no ship- Van *intro*
Luckily we came by or they would have just drowned- Jon
(*I despise talking for you guys!*)
Wait!- Lysa
?- all
You guys still have the ship I sent you out in?- Lysa
Yup- Jon
Okay! We’ll take that and go steal another ship!- Lysa
Sounds like a plan- Laura
Okay! Let me go get my stuff!- Lysa
(Stuff?- all)
*Tali follows*
…You are leaving?- Tali
-_- I thought you wanted me to- Lysa
I…- Tali
*Stops and stare at each other*
*Tali just looks away*
Hmph. Bye, Tali- Lysa
*Tali sighs*
Feel free to go past the bold part, it’s Daggers and my manga characters talking
WHAT?- Jack
You! How dare you let blond Sexy leave?!- Jack
*Tali sighs*
*Tsu toys with bangs*
Really, Tali…we just lost one team member already…-Tsu
Hey, you were the one who said if she could not get past the village incident, she wasn’t meant to be an assassin!- Tali
Did I say that…?- Tsu *disinterested as ever*
*Tali veins*
My shopping buddy ; ;- Anita
Good riddance- Cyn -_-
*Tsu holds Anita back*
Tali, come on…it’s only been 3 weeks. And from the sounds of it, Lysa has never seen things like that. We’ve seen it over and over. If she lets it dictate her life, then no, she’s not meant to be an assassin. But it’s normal to feel the way she…did- Tsu
…We’ve seen it over and over- Tali
?- all
I…do not wish her to become indifferent to such things- Tali
You dummy!- Anita
!- Tali
You don’t know Lysa at all! Men!- Anita
*Leaves*
Look, now you’ve gone and got Sexy mad- Jack (You’re on a roll)
…-Tali
*Turns*
I am going to go and get her back- Tali
Good luck- Tsu
Will he even be able to catch up?- Jack -_-
I doubt they got far…- Tsu
*Lysa seems glum*
Loser, what’s with you?!- Sree
Nothing…-Lysa
She’s sad because she had to leave her boyfriend-Donna
He wasn’t my boyfriend!- Lysa
You donut- Sree
-_- Lysa
ZOMG, are you for real?- Tesstory
It’s a miracle…- Tate
*Sree*
*Tate’s eyes*
So now what? We’ve finally found them and we’re just going to stand here and hide?- Jynrei
I want to be subtle, Jynrei. I haven’t seen her in a long time- Tate
Yea, I’m not sure how she’d respond to you stalking her- Adrian
I have not been—Tate
*Tesstory throws a glowing card*
What the f--!- Lakyle (I’m not “cutting” the profanity, but it’s more like he caught himself because he was talking loudly)
TESSTORY, why did you--?!- Tate
If a tree falls in the forest, does anyone hear it?- Tess (Makes nonsensical comments like this)
…………-all (O_O)
…What?- Adrian
Um, guys…-Tidus
*Loud crackle O_O*
*Shocked responses come from our direction*
Oh crap…- Jynrei
*Pirates attack ^^;*
Heyyy- Sree
?- All
I remember you!- Sree
I, uh…- Tate
Prince Tate of Adajia. What are you doing here?!- Sree
I…was…-Tate
Ugh! This idiot has been looking for you- Tess
Tesstory!- Tate
Huh? Why?- Sree
Be-because…- Tate
How cute- Van
^^- girls
>_> guys
*Tate sighs*
*Donna’s ears twitch (Remember ay, she’s a kitsune)*
Something’s coming- Donna
?- all
*Massive explosion*
*All manage to dodge*
What…?- Ryan
*Crowd of armed…people o.O*
Tate Esperanza…?- one
…Yes- Tate
Ha. Looking for Hibiki’s HQs and we find the prince…who also is wanted dead- one
!?!- Tate
Oh yea…I remember now- Adrian
! Wh-what?!- Tate
Ah yea, you’re kind of got a bounty over your head. I totally forgot to tell you- Tess
You’re all useless!- Tate *vein*
^^- Tidus
Why do you want Hibiki’s HQs…?- Lysa
We were hired to destroy it and all it’s members- two
…I won’t let you- Lysa
Ha, you don’t have to worry about it- one
*Dodges forward*
You’ll die here with the prince- one
!- Lysa
*Suddenly stops*
*Chopped down*
!?- Lysa
Are you all right?- Tali
! Tali?- Lysa
Damn. They’ve found out already- one
?- Tali
Tali, the-their coming after the headquarters!- Lysa
…I am not concerned- Tali
!!- guys trying to kill ppl
You-you should be concerned!- one
^^ Hi everybody! Is there a party?!- Anita
^^ There should be!- Tidus
Yay! Anita will get the confetti ^^- Anita
^^ I’ll get a cake- Tidus
…-everyone else
Anita…uh, these guys are trying to infiltrate the base- Lysa
*Anita glances at them*
*Chibi laughs*
That’s so funny! Anita has to get Tsu and Jack and tell them that one- Anita n_n
*dashes off*
They mock us!- two
Apparently- Adrian
*Draws his weapon, based off Luciendar, the sword of light*
*Jynrei pulls out his weapon…which I’ve forgotten. A rod o.O*
But yea, since we’re supposed to protect Prince Tate here, we’ll have to kill you- Jynrei
Not if we have her- ???
*All turn*
*Sree*
How dare you hold me captive!? I will (someone finish sree-esque statement)- Sree
When did that happen…?- Jon
Do we ever really notice Sree?- Donna
We try…-Laura
Grr…-Tate
*Tess throws cards, cutting the guards*
*Drop Sree*
*One tries to grab her but Tate uses…whatever her has >_>*
*Lakyle pulls out gun…I forgot what is was.. o.O*
*Shoots a couple*
This isn’t looking too good…- one
Yes…Mira won’t be happy- two
!! Mira?!- Tate
! It’s no concern to you, prince…more will come after you…and your little companions here, especially…- one
*Close up of Sree O_O*
Hey, we don’t know these guys!- Donna
Regardless- two
*Runs off*
Should we go after them…?- Adrian
No…-Tate
So we have people coming after US now?- Van
Great. Thanks a lot- Donna -_-
…We should get back to NY and try to figure out what this was all about- Ryan
We can’t leave them here…- Tate
We can fend for ourselves-Laura
Perhaps…but I’d feel more comfortable if you came with us- Tate
! Woah, woah…our place isn’t even big enough for US. How are we going to fit 8 more?- Tess
Simple….we’ll just buy another house- Tate
Stupid rich prince- Tess
Yea, well, that’s assuming we come with you in the first place…- Donna
Well…what should we do? Why is Sree involved anyway?- Andrea
Hmm…-Jon
What do you say, Lysa?- Caitlin
*Turn*
-^^- You came to get me back, Tali!?- Lysa *hugging tali*
*Tali blushes*
*We all sweatdrop*
Yea, anyway…-Andrea
We should go…just to find out what’s going on. Then we can leave- Van
I guess that works…- Caitlin
What do you say, Sree?- Donna
Do they have chocolate in the other world?- Sree
Uh…yea, lots of chocolate…- Andrea @_@
Then let’s go!!- Sree
Did I hear chocolate?!- Lysa
….-knights
^^ Yay, more friends!- Tidus
You coming Lysa?- Laura
Nope…I have a job to take care of here!- Lysa
…You sure, Lysa? I understand if you want to go with your friends- Tali
Yup… I don’t want another village to be destroyed like Juii’s. I’ll stay for now…but I’ll come visit you guys ^^- Lysa
Figures- Donna
XP- Lysa
*Tali smiles*
Come…let’s head for the portal- Tate
*We all walk away, waving back at Lysa*
*Lysa waves*
Bye!- Lysa
…You made a noble decision…but can you stick by it?- Tali
Of course! No more pointless death!- Lysa
*Tali seems surprised*
*Grabs his arm*
C’mon! Chocolate!- Lysa
*Tali sweatdrops*
+Am I selfish to have wanted her to stay...?- Tali+
*smiles off*
+Maybe+
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X Daggers
Munchy Monkey Owns You
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Posted - 08/22/2006 : 11:03:03 AM
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Don't forget I fixed this!:
Off for another pointless journey? Awesome...- Lakyle
This is the first time the map has done this…- Tate
Fine. When are we heading out?- Lakyle
Sometime [in the] early morning. Where are the others?- Tate
Am I their keeper?- Lakey -_-
You have to know where at least one of them is[!]- Tate
I know someone mentioned clubbing...- Lakyle
Gah…-Tate
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 11/11/2006 : 5:46:11 PM
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Mm, 6% done drawing this...Lakyle is killing me X_x
"The piercing radiant moon; The storming of poor June. All the life running through her hair. Approaching guiding light, our shallow years in fright. Dreams are made winding through my hand..."- Spiders, System of a Down |
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 11/05/2008 : 12:29:11 PM
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Because I found the knight intro horribly ugly and the writing really bad, I rewrote it...there's added dialogue and actual...story build up. And yea, Caitlin, if Lakyle's not the karaoke type, I can edit that...if so, tell me if those lyrics are right...Marilyn Manson's 'Coma Black'.
*Damon sitting in office*
*Smiles at woman*
Mira…how much longer are you going to wait?- Damon
*Woman smiles*
Not much longer…not much longer at all- Mira
*Stands*
Tate, foolish man…so cute <3- Mira
-_- Damon
But it’ll be just a matter of time…for now, let’s just shake him up a bit- Mira
*Mansion*
ADRIAN!- ???
*Door opens*
*Adrian “intro”*
What, man?- Adrian -_-
Have you SEEN these reports?! Why haven’t you told me about all these issues in Adajia?!- Tate *intro*
Is it MY country or is it YOURS? I’m not the future king- Adrian
Grr! My father has no idea what he’s doing anymore!- Tate
Wanna head back?- Adrian
Of course not- Tate *throws papers*
*Adrian smirks and slams down in chair, propping feet on desk*
We can’t keep chasing shadows, Tate- Adrian
I know that! I…I just don’t want to give up just yet- Tate
Well, whatever. We’re going out, you want to go?- Adrian
…No, I should stay here, follow leads…- Tate
Tate, you’ve sat in this room for weeks, come on, it’ll do you some good- Adrian
Adrian—Tate
U_U You’re supposed to consider my advice, milord- Adrian
Shut up- Tate *throws pen at him*
*Tate sighs, standing* I guess it might help me clear my head a bit…- Tate
Awesome- Adrian ^_^
+…Where the hell have you gone?- Tate+
“My mouth was a crib and it was growing lies. I didn’t know what love was on that day. My heart’s a tiny blood clot. I picked at it…it never heals, it never goes away”- Lakyle *intro and singing karaoke*
I don’t think Lakyle quite gets the happy cheerful concept of ‘karaoke’…-Jynrei *intro*
I’m not surprised- Adrian
(“I burned all the good things in the Eden Eye. We were too dumb to run, too dead to die”-Lakyle)
Did someone break Lakyle’s heart?! That’s so mean T-T Tidus *intro*
No, Tidus… Lakyle’s just a freak- Tesstory *intro*
”This was never my world. You took the angel away. I’d kill myself to make everybody pay. This was never my world. You took the angel away. I’d kill myself to make everybody pay”- Lakyle
Is it a bad thing if I want to cut myself?- Jynrei
I don’t think I’d consider that a good thing - Adrian
*Tate’s face buried in hands* This isn’t making me feel any better- Tate
Because you’re too focused on finding her, man. If we find her, we’ll find her. We just have to be patient. It’s a big world out there- Tesstory
I guess…-Tate
“Would have told her then she was the only thing that I could love in this dying world but the simple word "love" itself already died and went away”- Lakyle
Mother of God- Adrian
That’s it, let’s shake this bitch up!- Tesstory
*Attack’s Lakyle*
^_^ Cheer up, Tate! We should go on vacation somewhere!- Tidus
Vacation…?- Tate
Doesn’t sound like a bad idea- Ryan *intro, comes back with a pizza*
We should go to Japan…I heard they have pretty cool hot springs- Jynrei
That’s so boring though!- Tidus
You’d like it, Tidus, it’s like a fun, real hot tub…-Adrian
I like hot tubs ^^- Tidus
Well…I suppose it can’t hurt- Tate
*Ryan reading newspaper*
Did you hear about the Calian village…? Totally destroyed!- Ryan
Fire?- Jyn
No…reportedly, cannibalism…- Ryan
Ugh, that’s disgusting, they look like little kids too- Adrian
Big brother Adrian, what if the cannibals are eating all the little kids in the world?! What if they try to eat me too!?- Tidus
Tidus, I doubt for a second it’s anything like that…who normally is responsible for such atrocious acts?- Tate
Oh no, it’s like school…- Tidus
You think the Rougians are responsible? I know the Srevars are notorious for eating them…- Ryan
Wow, two species eat Calians? Poor things aren’t very high on the food chain…- Lakyle *returns from stage*
*Tate taps chin* So it seems…- Tate
I want to sing!- Tidus *leaps up*
No Sesame Street- Adrian >.<
; ; Tidus
*Tate laughs*
+I’m Tate Esperanza, Prince of a small country known as Adajia…these are my knights, the head of my army, my table…my friends- Tate+
*Focus on Tidus singing*
+We’re here in New York for now, to get away from…certain people. And I’m looking for someone that vanished a long time ago without warning…I don’t particularly know her all that well besides our written conversations and short visit but…I was especially drawn to her. She was my fiancée…- Tate+
+And I hope to find her-Tate+
*Lysa sitting outside on bench*
*Tali staring at her*
*Tsu sitting and reading behind him*
She’ll move on- Tsu
Oh, will she?- Tali
She has to…- Tsu
…Yes- Tali
I don’t know what went down in the Calian Village but I’m pretty sure it could’ve been stopped- Tsu
…I do not know…looked pretty…morbid- Tali
Killing a whole village of helpless creatures… *red glint*- Tsu
*Tali sighs lightly*
Yes …but…Lysa- Tali
Like I said…she can get past it. If she can’t, then maybe she wasn’t meant to be an assassin after all- Tsu
*Tali glances back outside*
…I think…that may be the case- Tali
?- Tsu
I am going to talk to her- Tali
Yea, you do that- Tsu *<-Insinuating something*
*Tali glowers*
*Pushes door open*
*Lysa looks up*
*Tali smiles*
Hello. How are you feeling?- Tali
Sad…- Lysa
I am sorry…- Tali
*Lysa sighs*
But it happens all the time, Lysa- Tali
!- Lysa
We can not always stop these things. I wish I could tell you this is the only time something like this will happen…but I cannot. It is okay to be upset…it is human. But if this distracts you…throws you off path…then maybe…you should…go- Tali
*Lysa doesn’t look happy ^^; *
So you want me to leave?- Lysa
Eh?? N-no! I mean- I do not—Tali
It sounds like it!- Lysa
*Turns*
Fine, I’ll go!- Lysa
Lysa, wait!- Tali
*Runs away*
*Tali quickly follows*
*Lysa suddenly stops*
Lysa…I just do not want you to get hurt- Tali
…- Lysa
Ly— Tali
LYSA~!!- ???
!!- Tali
*Lysa gets glomped*
You’re ALIVE!!- Sree ^^
-_- No thanks to you- Lysa
Meanie! I was going to give you chocolate too!!- Sree
*Holds bag of soaked chocolate*
O_O Lysa
…Uh, no thanks. I’ll just forgive you ^^;;- Lysa
Whoo!!- Sree
…-Jon *intro*
Oh my God, Jon!- Lysa
*Hugs him*
*Tali O.O*
Finally! We thought we would’ve had to turn Sree in for killing you- Donna *intro*
I’ll mardair you!- Sree
So yea, Lysa…who’s this?- Donna
! Oh, this….- Lysa.
*Tali looking puzzled*
This is Tali- Lysa
…-Tali
Is he the reason you didn’t even bother to look for the ship?- Laura
No!- Lysa
Uh huh- Sree
Whoo…we were able to save some of the stuff we stole- Andrea
?? Save? Why’d it have to be saved?- Lysa
…- all
Sree kind of burned down your ship- Caitlin
…-Lysa
*Chases after Sree*
…You are her…crewmates?- Tali
Can’t be anymore… no ship- Van *intro*
Luckily we came by or they would have just drowned- Jon
Wait!- Lysa
?- all
You guys still have the ship I sent you out in?- Lysa
Yup- Jon
Okay! We’ll take that and go steal another ship!- Lysa
Sounds like a plan- Laura
Okay! Let me go get my stuff!- Lysa
(Stuff?- all)
*Tali follows*
…You are leaving?- Tali
-_- I thought you wanted me to- Lysa
I…- Tali
*Stops and stare at each other*
*Tali just looks away*
Hmph. Bye, Tali- Lysa
*Tali sighs*
WHAT?- Jack
You! How dare you let blond Sexy leave?!- Jack
*Tali sighs*
Really, Tali…we just lost one team member already…-Tsu
Hey, you were the one who said if she could not get past the village incident, she was not meant to be an assassin!- Tali
Did I say that…?- Tsu *disinterested as ever*
*Tali veins*
My shopping buddy ; ;- Anita
Good riddance- Cyn -_-
*Tsu holds Anita back*
Tali, come on…it’s only been 3 weeks. And from the sounds of it, Lysa has never seen things like that. We’ve seen it over and over. If she lets it dictate her life, then no, she’s not meant to be an assassin. But it’s normal to feel the way she…did- Tsu
…We’ve seen it over and over- Tali
?- all
I…do not wish her to become indifferent to such things- Tali
You dummy!- Anita
!- Tali
You don’t know Lysa at all! Men!- Anita
*Leaves*
Look, now you’ve gone and got Sexy mad- Jack (You’re on a roll)
…-Tali
*Turns*
I am going to go and get her back- Tali
Good luck- Tsu
Will he even be able to catch up?- Jack -_-
I doubt they got far…- Tsu
*Lysa seems glum*
Loser, what’s with you?!- Sree
Nothing…-Lysa
She’s sad because she had to leave her boyfriend-Donna
He wasn’t my boyfriend!- Lysa
You donut- Sree
-_- Lysa
*Wandering around Japan, gathering supplies*
He was kind of cute- Jon
Tad short for my taste…-Me
Tali isn’t short! Except, he was WAY shorter than Tsu because Tsu’s like, 7 feet tall and shorter than Jack but he was taller than me, Anita, and Kuroshina!- Lysa
O_O Who?- all
And he was shorter than Jenario…Jenario never really talked but he seemed like he was cool. And Tsumura! Tsumura was so much fun, he was so nice to me…Cynthia was mean to me but Anita and I always went shopping during free time…- Lysa ; ;
Sounds like you’re having second thoughts about coming, Lysa…-Caitlin
No! Tali told me to leave and I won’t stay anywhere I’m not wanted!- Lysa
…Besides, I…I don’t think I was much help to the cause anyway- Lysa
?- us
Stupid!- Sree
?- Lysa
If you’re not helping then learn to help! You don’t have to leave because he said so- Sree
But…he’s right…I’m…really sad about the Calian’s deaths and I…I don’t want to see that anymore- Lysa
Isn’t that what your cause is though?- Laura
Yea, you said that group was working to stop Malik, right? Malik’s pretty known for destroying villages like that- Me
And in helping the group, you’re helping stop seeing things like that again- Jon
*Lysa ponders*
^_^ You should do what feels right-Van
Ugh! C’mon guys, we just found her, don’t convince her to stay- Donna
I…don’t know- Lysa
Well, let’s sleep on it. We still need to get supplies anyway- Me
Let’s find a hotel and crash there for a bit- Caitlin
Okay- Lysa
+What feels right…- Lysa+
"And if you go, I want to go with you. And if you die, I want to die with you. Take your hand and walk away..."- Lonely Day, System of a Down |
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X Daggers
Munchy Monkey Owns You
367 Posts |
Posted - 11/05/2008 : 5:04:58 PM
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I only read like, the first part of this so far... (I'll read the rest tomorrow) So far, it's hilarious. I like it. Lakyle's in a band, so he would sing, so karaoke is fine. And that's a perfect song for him :D (Good song, too) Ha!
*goes to bed*
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 11/05/2008 : 5:49:02 PM
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Yea, of course I'm not a huge MM fan but I remember we all watched the music video and it was kind of okay...though I could have sworn it was Coma White >.O
More to come when I figure out what's going on.
"And if you go, I want to go with you. And if you die, I want to die with you. Take your hand and walk away..."- Lonely Day, System of a Down |
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X Daggers
Munchy Monkey Owns You
367 Posts |
Posted - 11/06/2008 : 03:27:17 AM
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Ok, I think it's actually pretty close to what we would say to each other. Ahh I wish we were all together like this again! But I wouldn't want to go back to high school to do so. Oh well.
I don't really want to have MPD anymore... I'll just be myself. Just so you can later on not worry about including that randomly. Don't go back and change the pirate part that's already done, though, I don't care if I have MPD there because no one will remember anyway.
I can't wait for you to draw this (^_^) It's always so much more fun to see the characters with the dialogue.
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darkryuu
Number One Stunna'
USA
1017 Posts |
Posted - 11/06/2008 : 05:24:56 AM
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I'd do parts of high school over, yea. The whole thing, no...but I kind of do miss the whole gang being together at random points, especially since 2 of them are overseas and 2 we'll never see again ^^; But I guess that's why they say enjoy it while it's there...
Hmm, that might be weird since like everything written has been kind of been that way forever but we'll see how it goes.
"And if you go, I want to go with you. And if you die, I want to die with you. Take your hand and walk away..."- Lonely Day, System of a Down |
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Return of the Pirates
